Thursday, October 27, 2011

Thesis statement:
Celebrities' bad behavior is covered more in new stories than positive because its more interesting, magazines get more money, and people like to hear the gossip or drama.


Topic sentence #1:
First, many people like to hear or read about whats happening in celebrities life because its interesting.


Topic sentence #2:
Secondly, magazines get payed more money by putting bad behavior in them.


Topic sentence #3:
Finally, people like to hear the drama and gossip about celebrities.

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